i reckon some of them are a bit over sharpness, don't know that you did that, or the lens did, or my monitor lied to me~~^^
composition needs improvement a little. rule of thirds is not the everything, some unimportant background draws in to attention. the back ground of last pic was a bit messy though~~
on the good, u made it clear of what you want to show. I enjoy the second pic most~~ |